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Hey guys!

 

Just wanted to share with you Thor's new pictures and profile. He just started escorting a couple months ago and up until now he has been exclusively doing duos with me but now he feels confident enough to have his own profile. I wanted to ask you for your opinion on the pictures, the text, the overall read of the ad.

 

http://www.rentboy.com/thormaelstrom

 

Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

 

Big hug to you all!

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I think it is a great ad. The pictures are hot and the text is articulate and thoughtful. I always look at how an escort expresses himself in writing to determine if there will be chemistry. Some might think the ad a tiny bit too long, but I really enjoyed it. I wish I had an excuse to go to Vancouver and meet you both.

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Juan,

 

It's one of the best written ads posted on any site. Thor is a beautiful guy and his pictures show it. He makes me want to be a bottom. Congratulations. Maybe we can do a duo someday.

 

GTX

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Thanks guys. We really appreciate your feedback and hope we will meet you soon. I also thought the ad was a little long but when I edit it I find that I have to leave out stuff that describes Thor accurately so we left it as is. Let's see if anyone thinks it should be trimmed.

 

He makes it clear he's a top but maybe he would go for some rimming?

 

Even if Thor is strictly a top I have come across very few people who like getting rimmed more than he does. (If this is possible, he likes it even more than myself!) Which makes so much sense; God would be too cruel a tyrant had he created such an ass without giving us the chance enjoy it!

 

 

http://ecs.gaydar.net/newphotos/13/88/1356888_449310.jpg

 

God is fair after all! =)

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I thought the ad was great. Wonderful pictures. If you think the ad is too long, try the following. It's the same material, simply edited and condensed. I just trimmed a little here and there, replaced some longer words and phrases with shorter ones. It should be about six lines less now with all the same vital information and voice:

 

 

I am a tall blonde, green-eyed Swedish Canadian who speaks English, Japanese and French. At 6'3'', 205 pounds, I am a man in every way. Let me tell you the kind of experience we could have: I've have spent my life developing my mind and body making me the consummate companion for dinner, traveling or intimate encounters. Allow me to envelop you in my strong arms and immerse you in sensual pleasure. While I have been described as a "masculine tower of muscle," I also have a tender side few have experienced. Only a life lived in intimate connection is worth living, and I have a longing for sensual touch and passionate kissing. I'm told I have a soothing masculine voice and infectious laugh. When we are together, there will never be a dull moment. As I am well-dressed, well-groomed, articulate, friendly and fun, I make the ideal companion for social and cultural events. I am a seasoned traveler. When it comes to intimate matters, I have a 10x6 cock (cut). Though I am exclusively a top, I like to explore all other bodily pleasures. If you've been curious about experiencing two hot men at once, we can ask my smoldering Latino duo partner, Juan Bruno, to join us. He is a handsome, talented and versatile man who loves what he does. He's the only escort with whom I do duos. Check out his pictures in my Picture Gallery (password: more). I began escorting only recently, so I am still in the process of amassing reviews. You can read one by clicking on "webpage." I hope you'll soon be contributing your own. I've been blessed with meeting amazing men, and I look forward to meeting more of you! Big hugs -- Thor.

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Juan (and Thor) -- Wow. I like the ad the way it is although DG did a great job with it too. He seems a great guy to meet and spend time with. And cock to die for. Or die on. I can't imagine how those who have been lucky enough to book both of you simultaneously have felt being with two great guys like you two.

 

Congrats. Now both of you get to DC.

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I can only echo the true compliments of the previous contributors to this thread...but the last picture in the white briefs is a real turn on for me. Although I am 100% Swedish, I missed out on Thor's genes somewhere along the lien but would sure like to enjoy what the genes produced!!

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WOW, JUAN... great ad, pictures and text. Yes, the ad is a bit longer than most, but let's face it, so is Thor~! It clearly describes him and what one might expect, so if you want to edit some or condense that is ok too, but he's likely to get busy soon, even if he is in Vancouver! Sure hope to see the two of you on a trip stateside soon so we can enjoy both of your company! Have a great weekend.

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JT Brooklyn Grand Master

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Juan.. Your New Protege definitley has what it takes to be a Success in "The Wonderful World of the Working Guy"

 

I'm guessing someday the 2 of you will be visiting NYC and making those you meet as you and Sweet Kevin did in the past... Smile alot.

 

Best of Luck to "Big Guy Thor" he sure does take a Purdee Pix! JT

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Guys, just wanted to thank you on behalf of Thor. He read your responses and was very encouraged and grateful and we will consider your feedback seriously.

 

And... we hope we will get a chance to get Thor at kissing range from you. He really is a wonderful man and in the few days his ad has been out he has been really busy making new friends.

 

Here's to a gorgeous summer of new friends and great fun!

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Two things

At one point it is mentioned that he has a tender side which only a few get to sample. Would consider editing that in some way to indicate that he does indeed have a gentle side but it is not difficult to sample that.

The other comment is why torture we of the top persuasion with such a remarkable ass and then tell us it is out of bounds? One picture of the ass, and a great ass it is, is for completion, two pictures is a bit of torture. At least there is an entree there if not an entry.

One other point, while all his pictures are great, to my mind the weakest picture there is the first one. I would suggest either moving it down, moving it out and replacing it or just moving it out.

Would lead with the last picture in the tighty whiteys. It is a great pic, really accentuates the package without revealing the present. Then the cock shot with the underwear would be appropriate.

Generally loved the ad; loved the pics; love the subject; hate the part of the ad that says Vancouver. Come to NYC.

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What do you gentlemen think about the pics?

 

Mister Purplekow,

 

You are entirely right. As we speak I am editing the bit about the tenderness, you are entirely right. It's not an exclusive club, it's an invitation.

 

As for the pics...

 

Taking another look at the pics (Which is a little difficult to be objective about since I took them) I think I agree that the first one is the weakest. I, however don't entirely buy on starting with the tighty whities... I am not entirely sold on that idea so, at risk of abusing your attention a little more...

 

Gentlemen... which pictures do you think should be at the top.

 

Thanks a lot and big hugs!

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Don't discount the pic of Thor in the jock - that was pretty hot, I thought. I like the underwear shot though also and the one DG mentions above. No loser pictures there, though, IMHO. The ad is still long, I think, but it does give you a feel about him that is quite positive - definitely not too much info. Good luck.

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